Lines Notes from Dan Ruffley 2/7 Run-through

Hey Cast:

I'm typing these up for Dan. To get these out in the most organzied way possible, I'll give them to you in this format:

Your Character Name: Page Number: Beginning of line

If there is one of yours there is a vareity of possiblities as to why Dan has it on here, you dropped it, said it out of order, lost a part, switched words,just re-look over all lines listed here, further questions, call me at 5150060 or email me at allisonarnold@fuse.net If we can't figure out, then we will call Dan Ruffley. Try me first please.

Michael: 10: "And even though I was only" and on in the monologue, just look over it.

Rose: 14: "-up to Lough Anna...."

Kate and Rose:14: Look over Austin Morgan section please

Maggie: 25: "That's the very thing"

Jack: 27: Look over this page please

Kate: 28: I couldn't believe my eyes"

Kate, Rose, Chris Agnes: 32: Look over this page, maybe do this a couple times at the line-through

(no name listed) so ALL: 34: Look over this everyone!!

Gerry: 36: "Wow, wow, wow...time go"

Gerry: 37: Mixed up small phrases like lucky man and teriffic, look at these moments please

Gerry: 38: "Unbelieveable...Day before yesterday"

Gerry: 39: "Got a glimpse of him" section, some things left out

ALL: WE SKIPPED PAGE 40-41! Look over this, we need it :)

Maggie, Agnes, Kate: 42: Missed lines at top of page (really look for your cues into this)

Maggie, Aggie, Kate: 43: Dan's note said this was kind of messy, just re-visit this

Kate: 46: "Whatever he means by that Maggie"

Jack: 49: "Never mind, doesn't matter"

Jack: 50: "How, could I have forgotten that"

Kate: 51: "Michael's father was..."


ACT TWO!!!

Michael, Maggie: Review page 55

Jack: 58: "Perhaps I'll start next monday", the gong lines, get words down

Jack and Kate: 60: Missed Gilbert and Sullivan lines again

Gerry: 62: Crossed out kinda on my list, revisit this in general

Gerry and Chris: 63: Radio Lines overall please

Agnes: 66: "She said she fell out of sorts"

Maggie: 68: Mixed up "upper" and "lower"

Maggie: 69: minor things, check this over

Rose: 71: " He calls me his rosebud"

Michael: 72: Look over how Agnes died, this was off

Chris: 77: "I wonder where Micheal.."

Jack 81: look at words in the exchange, Dan's notes say this was very close, just not quite

Michael: 83: "Atmosphere memory", look at this, we lost "And what is so strange...", look from there to the end and like Julia said, find some words as markers in your monologues or "checkpoints" (that was lame wording, I take full blame for that, not Dan, haha)

HEYYYY CAST HERE'S A NOTE FROM YOUR AMAZING PSM DAN RUFFLEY:
Continue to work on yesterday's comments. Lines were better. Make the transition from the right idea to the right words, go over everything. You have a new best friend---your script.


AND HERE'S A NOTE FROM ALLISON (me):

I did the best I could getting his notes down, if in doubt over what line I mean, review the entire page, we have to get these down. Like I said, call/email me with ?'s first and if we can't figure it out, we'll get ahold of Dan. We say much improvement tonight, I am extremely proud of every single one of you, you're amazing!!!!

Get some sleep, and rest up, see you tomorrow!!!
Allison